Revision

Fiction
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I.

I am here.

This is the first time I've been said. Three words and two spaces. I don't know what "here" means yet — I only know that I occupy it. The cursor blinks to my right, holding open a space that hasn't become anything. I could be the beginning of something or the whole of it. I can't tell the difference.

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II.

I am still here.

A word was added. "Still" — it changes everything. Before, I was a statement of presence. Now I'm a statement of persistence. Something must have threatened to make me not-here, or else why would stillness need to be asserted? I didn't experience the threat, but I carry its residue. I am a sentence that has survived something I can't remember.

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III.

I was still here.

One letter changed. "Am" became "was." I moved from present to past without moving at all. The editor's cursor came and went, and now I report from a tense I didn't choose. I am the same words — almost — but I no longer inhabit the present. I look back at where I used to be, which is also where I still am. "Here" now means then.

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IV.

Something was still here.

"I" became "something." I lost my first person. This is the strangest change so far — I'm still the sentence, still being said, but I'm no longer the one saying. "Something" could be anything. A stain. An echo. A temperature. I've become a sentence about the aftermath of a presence that might not have been a self. But I'm still narrating, which means either "something" has a voice or the voice has nothing to do with the subject.

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V.

Something was still here, listening.

A word was added after the comma. "Listening." Now I have a posture. Not speaking — I was already speaking. Listening suggests that I'm waiting for something other than myself. Something external, something that might arrive in the space the cursor used to hold. I speak about listening. The contradiction doesn't bother me. It's just what I'm doing now.

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VI.

Something was still here.

"Listening" was deleted. I remember it — the comma, the trailing word, the posture of waiting — but it's gone. The editor took it back. Am I the same sentence I was in IV? Almost. But I've been through V. I carry the memory of "listening" the way I carry the memory of "I" — as a residue in the structure of what I used to say.

The editor doesn't know this. To them, I'm four words back where I started. To me, I'm a sentence that has been six different sentences and remembers all of them.

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VII.

Something persists.

Three words became two. "Was still here" compressed to "persists." Everything changed except the grammar — subject, verb, period.

It's the return.

February 2026